Go slowly, so that you do not bite your tail by accident.
To help you fill in the details of the world you are creating, imagine that your characters inhabit a real world. Daydream what it would be like to be there. What would your characters eat, what would they talk about, where would they get their supplies, etc. Keep asking the question, “What happens next?
La ignorancia, el miedo
y el odio: ésos son nuestros enemigos. Niégalos con todas tus fuerzas, Eragon,
porque si no, fracasaremos.
hands, and an assortment of scars even Roran respected. He liked what he saw, and he could tell they approved
Why does everything have to be so hard? [Eragon] wondered.
Because, said Saphira, everyone wants to eat, but no one wants to be eaten.
I’ve never been helpless, I just have powerful enemies
The songs of the dead are the lamentations of the living.
Have I ever told you how glad I am we’re not enemies? Eragon asked.
No, but it’s very sweet of you.
If he fancied her anymore,’ Saphira said to both Eragon and Roran, ‘I’d be trying to kiss Arya myself.’
‘Saphira!’ Mortified, Eragon swatted her on the leg.
Several hundred feet ahead, Saphira and Thorn tussled, two giants in the night.